LISA_sonic_lover
01/08/16 11:30PM
when it rains chapter 4-REVENGE
"You want us to kill them?" The blue hedgehog repeated, his voice cracking.

Everyone took a good look at lord metarex.

"That's right, Sonic the Hedgehog. And it has to be you me and shadow," pointing his finger at Sonic. His voice was still the same, maybe a bit deeper and older.

"Me? But why? Why do I even have to kill?"

"Amy Rose. You were raped, weren't you? 'The Bloods' are a nasty group of hedgehogs. They rape every pretty young woman in sight. But, they have a pattern," metarex got up from his velvet chair, walking to the crew, who were all still surprised.

"I know where they're headed next. This could be your one chance to finally capture them, to plan your revenge on them. After all, they've already conquered forty-nine towns, Station Square being number fifty. They need to be stopped. And I will help you, Sonic team. Only if you agree to kill, Sonic. If you don't, then you can kiss your chances goodbye." metarex extended his right hand.

The blue hedgehog shook his hand.

XX

Apparently, Shadow had already met with metarex before the crew did, and was waiting at Tails's workshop for their return. Now, everyone was seated before Eggman, waiting to hear his plan of attack.

"The Bloods have a pattern, like I've said before. Their next stop is going to be their last. They'll be at the park at sundown. We have to be at the park before them, so I would think fifteen minutes before dusk. Sonic, Shadow, you should round them up and threaten them and fight them, but don't kill them yet. The rest of you should stay here. The they are sentenced to death. It should be easy. But it's not. The Bloods have many weapons equipped and they're not afraid to kill. So be careful. Everybody got that?"
metarex stood up. "It's time."

XX

The crew was at the entrance of the park, and it was only minutes before dusk.

"Alright, remember what meta told you guys? Just be quick but be careful," Sonic reminded shadow

"Alright, let's get going here!" metarex impatiently yelled at everyone, wanting to get this over with already. "I just want to kill them already!" He made an air punch, showing off his new metal claws.

"Hmph," Shadow audibly smirked, making his leave to the park.

"You be careful too, Shadow! Okay?" Cream shouted to him, causing his heart to warm up a bit, but of course had no intentions of showing that.

Soon everyone left to their required positions.

The trio walked in the park, watching every single corner like a hawk, and hearing every single movement like a bat.

"For such a big day like this, the sky sure is quite clear," sonic pointed out, acknowledging the tangerine sky with no clouds in sight.

"Well if The Bloods have the power to make it rain on such a big day like this, then we don't stand a chance. But nonetheless they don't," Shadow sneered. "Now pay attention!"

"Well, I was! I just happened to look in the direction of the sky! What if they're bats or something, or maybe even vampires!"

"They're hedgehogs. Hedgehogs can't become vampires."

"Well they only rape people at night, so it's a suggestion, okay?"

"If they raped in the mornings or day time, don't you think they'd be pretty damn recognizable?"

"Don't use that tone with me! I'm just trying to suggest something, damn it!"

"Guys, shh!" The blue hedgehog interrupted their quarrel after hearing something. There was a rustle, some whispers and then nothing.

"Who's out there? Don't be scared, come out and show yourselves!"

"Why would we be scared?" A voice erupted behind them, making them turn to face them. scrouge.

"Because you don't know who you're up against!" metarex balled up his hands, ready to throw anything at them.

"Heh, so you think you're a tough guy, eh? Tell me, whatever did I do to you to seek revenge against me?"

"You raped Amy! And now she's holding your baby!"

"Aw, is she really? Is it a boy or a girl? What's the name going to be?" The leader of the group showed a mocking concern on his face, angering the trio. "Tell me, is this 'Amy' the pink one? Heh, she was a real screamer."

"Shut up," Sonic got into his fighting stance, his eyes burning bright with real fury.

"Ooh, big boy told me to shut up. My heart is shaking in fear," he smirked, the other hedgehogs laughing.

"Y'know, I ought to kill you right now…but I'm not that desperate," Shadow told them, making them laugh even harder.

"Yeah, we aren't either. But we're not afraid either," the leader remarked, pulling out a gun but not pointing it at them yet. "Y'know it's a shame I didn't have the pink one longer. But the other guys wanted her so mu-"

"You know what I'll do? I'll chop it off if you don't stop talking like that right now!"

"Oh yeah? Then I'll rip it o-"

"I'll rip it off," Shadow interrupted, hearing the sirens. The four must've gotten to the police.

"Yeah! And then I'll smash it up real good so you can't ever sew it back on and stuff!" metarex smirked after seeing fear in a couple of the hedgehogs.
a long battle happend but scrouge and his crew were no match for metarex shadow and sonic, metarex looked at sonic and shadow, "do it* he yelled "finish them or i will"
metarex killed the lot....it was a bloodbath



Amy_Rose_
01/08/16 11:35PM
Not my favorite chapter but I know it's mainly for the guys.
LISA_sonic_lover
01/08/16 11:37PM
Amy_Rose_ said:
Not my favorite chapter but I know it's mainly for the guys.
well one more chapter and its over, get your tissues ready amy your going to need them
Saigo
01/08/16 11:44PM
I didn't mind the chapter. The thing I didn't like was the gang, The Bloods. It just seems unoriginal, maybe even taken from the real life Los Angeles gang.
LISA_sonic_lover
01/08/16 11:45PM
Saigo said:
I didn't mind the chapter. The thing I didn't like was the gang, The Bloods. It just seems unoriginal, maybe even taken from the real life Los Angeles gang.
yeah sorry i disdnt know what to call them, one lsat chapter and its done
Saigo
01/08/16 11:46PM
LISA_sonic_lover said:
Saigo said:
I didn't mind the chapter. The thing I didn't like was the gang, The Bloods. It just seems unoriginal, maybe even taken from the real life Los Angeles gang.
yeah sorry i disdnt know what to call them, one lsat chapter and its done

Then I look forward to reading it.
LISA_sonic_lover
01/08/16 11:47PM
Saigo said:
LISA_sonic_lover said:
Saigo said:
I didn't mind the chapter. The thing I didn't like was the gang, The Bloods. It just seems unoriginal, maybe even taken from the real life Los Angeles gang.
yeah sorry i disdnt know what to call them, one lsat chapter and its done

Then I look forward to reading it.
almost finished it love
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