Dark_Lord
07/18/14 03:32AM
Life [Cancelled]
This was a Teen Drama type Story,I used some of the TV Show Bates Motel ideas,But its not Psycho!





Cast:
Nicola Peltz as Brittany Martin:Female [Age 19]

Jake Smith:Male [Age 20]

Chris Dillon:Male [Age 20]

Ben Smith:Male [Age 27]
Dark_Lord
07/18/14 03:33AM
Story
*Jake Smith was sitting on a bench at the "Bus Stop" waiting for the School Bus, Jake had his Headphones in his Ears listing to "Breaking Benjamin: Blow Me Away", Brittany was walking with her friends down towards the "Bus Stop", Brittany saw someone sitting at the "Bus Stop"?, One of Brittany's friends saw Jake?* [Friend] Who is the new guy? [Brittany] I don't know let's go talk to him *Brittany and her 3 friends walk towards Jake at the "Bus Stop", Jake don't know that Brittany and her friends are coming?, Brittany walked over by the right side of Jake, Brittany sat by Jake Brittany took Jake's Headphones out!, Jake looked at Brittany!?* [Brittany] Hi!, You new here? *Jake looked at Brittany nervous* [Jake] Um, Yeah!,Yeah i am [Brittany] Cool, Im Brittany!, And these are my friends,Beth and Harley and Lucy! *Jake looks at them* [Jake] Hi nice to meet you *Jake looked at Brittany* [Jake] My name is Jake [Brittany] Hi Jake!, Do you have a Girlfriend? *Jake looked around then looked back at Brittany* [Jake] No, No i don't *A Car is speeding down the road by the "Bus Stop", The Car stopped!, The Girl Driver looked at Brittany* [Girl-Driver] Hey Brittany you need a ride! *Brittany looked at the Driver* [Brittany] Yes! *Brittany's Friends got in the Car, Brittany got up off the bench, Brittany looked at Jake* [Brittany] Come on go with us! *Jake looked at Brittany* [Jake] {Shit She's Beautiful How Could I Say No!} Uh yeah sure i will go *Brittany smiled at Jake and grabbed his arm Brittany pulled Jake in the Car!, Jake sit down in the left side in the back Car, Brittany sat on Jake's lap!, Brittany looked at Jake* [Brittany] Am i to heavy? *Jake smiled at Brittany nervously* [Jake] No your fine! *Brittany smiled at Jake, Brittany grabbed Jake's Phone from his hand!, Brittany took a picture of her self!, Then Brittany typed in her "Phone Number",Brittany gave Jake his phone back smiling, Jake grabbed it* [Brittany] If there's anything bothering you at School just call Me! *Brittany smiled, Jake Smiled* [Jake] Ok! *The Car is driving to The School, Jake looked at Brittany* [Jake] {Man this has to be a dream!, She is Beautiful!} *Brittany looked at Jake smiling, The Car drove into the Schools parking lot, Brittany's friends got out of the Car, Brittany got off of Jake's Lap,Brittany got out of the Car, Brittany turned around and looked at Jake smiling, Jake smiled and got out of the Car,Jake is standing by Brittany, Brittany looked at Jake smiling* [Brittany] Come on! *Brittany grabbed Jake's arm! and walking inside the School!, They walk in School, Jake looked around and saw people going to class,Brittany looked at Jake* [Brittany] Jake let's go *Brittany and Jake walk in a "Class Room", They sit down in there desk, Brittany looked at Jake,She smiled at Jake, Jake smiled back at Brittany, The Students are working on "School Work" so is Jake and Brittany, Later School was over!, Jake left a "Class Room", Brittany followed by behind him, Jake looked behind him, Jake saw Brittany's beautiful face!, Brittany smiled at Jake* [Brittany] Well i better head home now, It was nice meeting you Jake! *Jake smiled at Brittany* [Jake] Yeah it was really really nice to meet you! *Brittany smiled* [Brittany] Well bye [Jake] Bye *Brittany left School, Jake left School,Jake walked over to the road, Brittany saw Jake over by the road, Brittany walked over there by Jake* [Brittany] Hi Jake! *Jake looked back and saw the Beautiful Brittany!* [Jake] Oh hey Brittany! [Brittany] What are ya doing waiting for the Bus to take you Home? [Jake] Uh, Yeah yes i am *Brittany smiled at Jake* [Brittany] Well Me and my friends could give you a ride Home *Jake looked at Brittany's friends, Then looked back at Brittany* [Jake] Yeah sure that would be great *Brittany smiled* [Brittany] Ok, Great! *Brittany waved over at Her friends!, Her friends drive over by them, Jake got in the back, Brittany got in the back too, She sat by Jake, Jake smiled, Brittany is smiling, There driving to Jake's House, Brittany looked at Jake* [Brittany] Hey Jake *Jake looked at the Beautiful Brittany!* [Jake] What? [Brittany] There's gonna be a Party Tonight!, You coming? *Jake got nervous!* [Jake] Uh, Yeah i will see if i can make it *Brittany smiled* [Brittany] Great! *They continue to drive to Jake's House, Finally they drive in Jake's "Drive Way", Jake got out of the Car* [Brittany] Bye Jake! *Brittany is waving at Jake! smiling, Jake waved at Brittany and smiled!, Jake walked in His House, Jake looked around the House, Then Jake saw His "Big Brother" in the kitchen, Jake walked in the kitchen* [Jake] What's up bro! *Ben looked behind Him and saw Jake sitting at the table in the Kitchen!* [Ben] Oh hey Jake,What was that School like? [Jake] Yeah, Its pretty cool! [Ben] Good good *Ben grabbed out a chair and sat on the other side of Jake, Ben threw Jake a Apple!, Jake grabbed the Apple!* [Ben] So what do you wanna have for Supper?
LunaEx
07/18/14 01:33PM
Now, I might look like an ass or something, but I can't read huge blocks of text if they're not divided in paragraphs.

When I see them my mind quickly goes like "damn" and it locks itself... :I

Also, sorry for stepping in the middle of the story... if it hasn't ended...
TyrannWright
07/18/14 04:54PM
LunaEx said:
Now, I might look like an ass or something, but I can't read huge blocks of text if they're not divided in paragraphs.

When I see them my mind quickly goes like "damn" and it locks itself... :I

Also, sorry for stepping in the middle of the story... if it hasn't ended...
Naw, it sucks anyways. :P Something about a little kid wanting to be an adult, but calls them teens instead.
unknowmoney23
07/19/14 12:52AM
TyrannWright said:
LunaEx said:
Now, I might look like an ass or something, but I can't read huge blocks of text if they're not divided in paragraphs.

When I see them my mind quickly goes like "damn" and it locks itself... :I

Also, sorry for stepping in the middle of the story... if it hasn't ended...
Naw, it sucks anyways. :P Something about a little kid wanting to be an adult, but calls them teens instead.


i believe that is true and i agree @TyrannWright
Dark_Lord
07/20/14 03:46AM
*Jake bitten His Apple! and chewing it!* [Jake] I don't know? *Ben smiled* [Ben] Yeah of course you don't *Jake laughed, Jake is eating His Apple!, Ben got up and walked to the "Living-Room", Ben sat on the couch, Ben turned on the TV Ben is watching "Die Hard", Jake threw His Apple in the garbage!, Jake walked in the "Living-room", Jake walked by the couch, Jake is standing by the couch watching "Die Hard"* [Ben] You know what Jake *Jake was still watching "Die Hard"* [Jake] What? [Ben] Do you think my Girlfriend is gonna move in with us? *Jake looked away from the TV!, Jake got a little Mad* [Jake] She better not move in! *Ben looked at Jake confused why he sounded a little Mad* [Ben] Why, What's the problem? *Jake looked at Ben* [Jake] Because she don't like Me and i don't like Her!, You know this *Ben shaken his head "Up And Down" agreed with Jake* [Ben] Yeah your right *Jake rubbed His eyes* [Jake] Well im gonna take a Nap [Ben] Alright *Jake walked out of the Living-room and by the Front-Door then up the Stairs, Jake walked up the Stairs and walked towards His Bedroom-Door, Jake opened His Bedroom-Door and walked inside His "Bedroom", Jake shut the Door behind Him and got on His Bed, Jake is thinking of Brittany!* [Jake] {Man Brittany is so Beautiful!} *Jake is thinking of Brittany in a field of flowers!, Brittany is in a white dress! walking threw the flowers!, Jake then fell asleep, Meanwhile Down Stairs Ben is thinking of what to have for Supper? Ben got up off the couch and walked into the kitchen. Ben opened up the Freezer, Ben saw nothing for Supper. Later Jake was sleeping dreaming of Brittany. Jake rolled over on his bed. Brittany walked over to Jake and hugged him!
[Jake] Oh hi Brittany!
[Brittany] Hi Jake!
*Jake hugged Brittany, Brittany then kissed Jake's lips! Jake looked at Brittany. Jake then kissed Brittany back! Brittany then gentle pushed Jake on the bed! Brittany got on top Jake and kissing his lips! Jake is rubbing Brittany's back. Jake rolled over on top Brittany!*
[Jake] Man your so beautiful!
*Brittany kissed Jake's lips again! Then Brittany stopped kissing Jake, Jake is then kissing Brittany's neck! Then somehow Jake fell off the bed! Jake woke up from his dream! Jake looked around and he sees him self on the ground off his bed*
[Jake] I must of fell of my bed
*Jake got up off the floor and walked down stairs. Jake notice that it's Nightime out side, Jake walked in the Living-Room and saw that Ben was gone. Jake walked in the Kitchen and looked around and saw nobody in the Kitchen. Jake then walked over to the front door and opened the door, Jake walked out on the porch and saw Ben's Car was gone? Jake then thought that Ben is getting supper, Jake walked back in the house and into the Living-Room and sat on the couch and turned on the TV. "Scream was on TV. Jake is watching Scream, Later Ben drove back in the driveway and got out of his Car and grabbed the food and walked up on the porch and rang the door bell! Jake heard the bell ring! Jake got up off the couch and walked towards the front door, Jake opened the front door and saw Ben with food in his hands*
[Ben] Well are ya just gonna stand there or are you going to help me?
[Jake] Oh yeah, Sorry!
*Jake grabbed the food and took the food in the Kitchen.Ben then walked in the house and shut the front door and walked into the Kitchen Ben walked by Jake*
[Ben] So how's Mcdonald's for Tonight?
[Jake] Yeah it looks good!
*Jake dug in the Mcdonald's bag and grabbed a Double Quarter Pounder With Chase box and put it on the table*
[Jake] This one is mine right?
[Ben] Yeah! I got us both them!
*Ben then grabbed his and opened up the box, Jake opened up his box*
[Ben] Guess who had the nerves to ask me to help them!
[Jake] What let me guess Uncle Rick?
[Ben] What no why would he ask for help?
[Jake] I was joking Ben
[Ben] Well anyways it was Mom
*Jake slowly looked away from his food and looked at Ben*
[Jake] What!?
[Ben] Yeah can you believe that! After what she did to us
[Jake] What the Hell did she need help with?
[Ben] Money!
[Jake] What! Are you Fucking kidding Me! No no she is not getting are money, She said the same Damn thing to Uncle Randy and look what happened to him!
[Ben] Please bro calm down! I didn't give Her any money
*Jake shook his head in angry! Ben looked at Jake. But then the front door bell rang!, Ben looked over there at the front door*
[Ben] I will get it
*Ben walked over to the front door and opened the door and saw Brittany and Her friends!*
[Brittany] Hi is Jake here?
*Ben looked at Brittany and Her friends*
[Ben] Yes Jake is here
*Ben looked over towards Jake and Yells*
[Ben] Jake! there someone here to see you!
*Jake looked confused! Jake walked towards the front door and saw Brittany! Brittany looked at Jake*
[Brittany] Hi Jake!
[Jake] Uh, Hi!
[Brittany] I was just wondering if you would come study with us?
*Ben looked at Jake*
[Jake] Yes i would like to study with you!
[Brittany] Oh great!
TyrannWright
07/20/14 05:29AM
Everyone has spoken, STOP. :P
Theclarinetist
07/24/14 08:46PM
Dark_Lord
07/27/14 03:30PM
[Jake] Yeah let me go get my things
[Brittany] Ok i will be waiting
*Jake smiled at Brittany, Jake ran upstairs into his room and got his things. Jake then ran downstairs towards the front door!*
[Jake] Ok im all ready!
[Brittany] Great, let's go
*Jake walked outside with Brittany towards the Bus Stop. Jake and Brittany walked all the way to the Bus Stop, Jake is to nervous to speak to Brittany! They are now at the Bus Stop. Jake looked around, Jake is wondering why there at the Bus Stop and not her house?*
[Jake] What are we waiting for?
[Brittany] Oh, My friends!
[Jake Oh, Ok
*Jake sat down on the bench, Brittany saw Jake sit down. Brittany sat right by Jake, Jake looked at Brittany, Brittany was on her phone sending messages to her friends. Brittany then put her phone away in her pocket, Brittany looked at Jake and smiled and Jake smiled back at her*
[Jake] So...., Are your friends almost here?
[Brittany] Yeah they should be up that hill over there
*Jake looked over at the hill, And Brittany's friends drove up the hill and drove by the Bus Stop then they stopped! Brittany smiled and walked towards the Car, Jake walked behind her*
[Brittany] You wanna get in first?
[Jake] Nah you can
*Brittany got in the Car she sat behind the driver, Jake got in and sat in the middle by Brittany. Brittany looked at Jake*
[Brittany] Uh, Jake we're really not going to study, We're gonig to a party
*Jake looked at Brittany*
[Jake] That's alright
*Brittany smiled at Jake*
[Brittany] Really!
[Jake] Yeah its fine
*Brittany leaned her head on Jake's left shoulder! Jake looked at Brittany, Jake smiled. They are driving towards a party and Brittany still has her head on Jake's shoulder! They are now at the party they drove in the yard because a lot of people are parked everywhere. Brittany opened her door and got out, Jake went out Brittany's door. Jake saw how big the party was!*
[Jake] Crap! This is a big party!
*Brittany smiled*
[Brittany] Yeah let's go in!
*Brittany and Jake walk in the house and they see the huge party inside! Brittany smiled at Jake, Jake smiled back at Brittany. Brittany walked over to the Bar Jake saw Brittany walk over their, Jake followed her to the Bar and Chris Dillon was at the Bar! Chris Dillon looked at Brittany and Jake, Brittany walked over towards Chris and she Kissed Chris on the lips! Jake was shocked that Brittany Kissed someone! Chris looked at Jake*
[Chris] Hey! You got a problem
*Jake looked at Chris*
[Jake] Nope do you have a problem
*Chris looked at Jake, Chris is giving Jake a angry face, Jake smiled because he made him mad*
[Brittany] Ok just stop Chris!
[Chris] Yeah ok babe
*Chris Kissed Brittany on the lips in front of Jake to make Jake jealous! Jake is looking at Chris. Brittany then grabbed two glasses of Mt Dew, Brittany looked at Jake*
[Brittany] Here
*Brittany is giving Jake a glass of Mt.Dew, Jake looked at the glass and grabbed it*
[Brittany] Come on Jake
*Brittany and Jake walked out on the front porch. Brittany sat down in a chair Jake did the same*
[Jake] So that was your Boyfriend?
[Brittany] Yeah....Im sorry that he was acting like that
[Jake] No no its fine i can take it
*Brittany smiled*
[Brittany] Yeah well Chris gets jealous a lot if im around any Boy
[Jake] Well i can see why.....I mean Chris is very lucky to have you
[Brittany] Haha yeah well.......Chris needs to cool it
[Jake] Yeah he dose
*Brittany smiled at Jake, Jake smiled at Brittany. Meanwhile inside the party Chris and Blake are talking on the couch*
[Chris] Yeah man you should of seen this guy, He just walks in the party with my girl!
[Blake] Thinks he's hot stuf is what he thinks
[Chris] Yeah well he better watch it when im around, Because i will Fuck him up!
[Blake] I sure would love to film that!
*Chris got up off the couch, Blake did the same Chris and Blake are walking out on the porch. They see Brittany and Jake talking, Blake walked by Jake and Chris walked by Brittany*
[Blake] Is this the stupid little Fuck you were talking about!
*Chris nodded his head up and down, Brittany looked at Blake*
[Brittany] Hey why don't you just stop and move on!
[Blake] I don't think so Britt
*Jake got up out of his chair! And looked at Blake!*
[Jake] And who are you! Chris's lap dog!
[Blake] Seriously.....
[Brittany] Chris will you just get him out of here!
[Chris] Why babe it's a party anybody can be here
[Brittany] Then why are you trying to make Jake leave?
[Blake] So the Fuckers name is Jake
[Jake] Yeah that's my name don't wear it out....
*Chris looked at Jake*
[Chris] Hey there's a thing called get in the party then get kicked out! You wanna get kicked out!
*Jake slowly looked at Chris, Brittany looked at both Chris and Jake*
[Jake] Really Chris, Well i thought i heard your Mom say be nice to your party guest
[Chris] Are you really that lame, That you have to come up with these lame ass insults
*Jake was mad at Chris and walked off! Brittany got up out of her chair! and saw Jake walk away. Brittany looked at Chris*
[Brittany] Fuck You Chris!
*Brittany walked to the Car and got in the Car and grabbed Jake's study books. Then Brittany walked off trying to find Jake.
TyrannWright
07/31/14 04:43AM
Theclarinetist
07/31/14 04:56AM
UNGRATEFUL BASTARDS! YOU VOTE SOME UGLY PEOPLE FROM FINLAND WHO DON'T EVEN HAVE THERE OWN MAKEUP ARTIST AND YOU NO VOTE ME BECAUSE I'M NOT A SLUT FROM HOLLAND AND I'M NOT AN UGLY FUCKING OLD BITCH FROM SWEDEN!!! .....FUCK YOU!!
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