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So, ever wanted to see a rule34 comic involving Sylvia, Goofy's new girlfriend from An Extremely Goofy Movie? Well apparently so did the people at Milftoons, but their delivery was lackluster at best. Sure the are is pretty good, but it's baffling how short and rushed this comic is and commits 3 egregious writing sins that are indefensible.
Strike 1: Tell, don't show. The sex between Max and Sylvia only lasts like 4 pages and rather than show how this happened, we're just told they've been doing this for a while.
Strike 2: Irrelevant characters: Why are Peg and PJ here? They don't do anything substantial and are completely absent for more than half the comic. If they were written out entirely, nothing about the story would change.
Strike 3: Cliffhanger. This comic has the nerve to end with the infamous 3 words "To Be Continued." Thus making this entire comic one big tease. Had this comic rectified these 3 writkng no-nos, this could been something worth while. As it is, this is just lame -.-